How and what will prepare u you for the 21st century?
I Think that having a good job will help prepare you for the 21st century. The job of Social Services worker would be a great help to kids or people in an abusive homes. Hopefully people who get this job in the 21st century will help kids be able to speak up! This will help the children by not having abusive parents or other family hurting them anymore for the rest of their lives. Children need a good home too help them do good in school and get a good job to help them later on in their lives. Would you help these kids in need?
http://www.resumagic.com/21stcenturyjobs.html
I Think that having a good job will help prepare you for the 21st century. The job of Social Services worker would be a great help to kids or people in an abusive homes. Hopefully people who get this job in the 21st century will help kids be able to speak up! This will help the children by not having abusive parents or other family hurting them anymore for the rest of their lives. Children need a good home too help them do good in school and get a good job to help them later on in their lives. Would you help these kids in need?
http://www.resumagic.com/21stcenturyjobs.html
These are the errors I found: spell out u, third sentence doesn't make sense.
ReplyDeleteI think your reasons for being a social worker are absolutely wonderful! I agree.
Please fix. Write about what you will do to prepare for the 21st century job you chose. Ms. A.
I agree completely! Kids shouldn't be living in abusive homes. Being a social worker is a great idea for a job! I couldn't understand the 3rd sentence very well, but i think I know what you mean. Great with details to!
ReplyDeleteI love it! But there are a few problems....you put you twice. and your third sentence does not make sense. Great job!
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